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Insights: Boost writing skills with FeedbackFruits

Discover an innovative solution to marking written assignments at scale using FeedbackFruits.

Can you improve writing and critical thinking in a large class while keeping marking manageable?

ENGGEN 140, a first-year engineering course with 1,000 students, tackled this challenge by redesigning its assessment process. Using FeedbackFruits’ Peer Review tool, the teaching team enabled students to engage deeply with peer feedback, refine their writing, and develop evaluative judgment—all while significantly reducing the marking load for staff.

Addresses these teaching challenges:

  • Developing students’ critical assessment abilities
  • Marking load for staff

Challenges: Developing evaluative judgement and managing marking load

With 1,000 students submitting 700-word essays, the teaching team faced a hefty 120-hour marking task. They saw this as a chance to boost students’ analytical skills while managing the workload. Their goal: find a creative solution to sharpen critical thinking and provide timely, helpful feedback.

TEL solution for peer-review at scale

FeedbackFruits’ Peer Review was scaled to facilitate draft essay reviews. Since 2023, the team has been piloting the use of the Peer Review tool to facilitate a draft essay peer-review process. This approach not only enhanced student learning by engaging them in the assessment process and enabling them to learn from one another, but also helped teaching staff manage the workload.

What it looked like in practice

The process involved:

  1. Submission: Students submitted a draft version of their essay and reviewed three peers’ drafts using a rubric provided by the teaching team.
  2. Peer review: Drafts and reviews were anonymised to ensure unbiased feedback. Each student reviewed three of their peers’ submissions using the rubric.
  3. Feedback: Students received anonymous feedback from their peers, which they could use to improve their final submissions.

The outcome

The use of peer review transformed the writing skills of first-year engineering students. Key outcomes included:

  • Improved student engagement: The knowledge that their work would be read by others and the actual feedback from peers encouraged students to put more effort into their writing, resulting in better final submissions.
  • Interim feedback: The peer review process provided interim feedback, which was crucial for students to refine their work before final submission.
  • Skill development: Despite some students initially choosing engineering to avoid writing, the course highlighted the importance of writing skills in the field. Scaffolding this skill development through peer review helped students practice and improve. Having to review their peers’ work helped students develop evaluative judgement skills.

Overall, by fostering early engagement and reflective learning, the tool has helped students produce better quality work.

“I think FeedbackFruits was very good in encouraging students to put more effort in earlier on and ultimately is bringing about better results in the end.

 

“Part of the feedback that we ask the students to give each other was to try mark the three other students against that same rubric that their own work is going to be marked on against. The idea there was that, you know, that would help students to think in terms of the rubric to reflect on their own writing as well.” – Michael Hoffman

Additional advice

Sharing average grades from previous years helps set realistic expectations for students about the difference between peer and teacher-awarded marks, as students often grade peers more generously.

Takeaways from this teaching example

Don’t hesitate to use peer review also in very large classes (500+ students) as it can effectively manage class size while enhancing students’ writing and critical thinking skills. Ensure the rubric is well-designed for clear evaluation criteria. Assigning peer feedback can be both empowering and motivational for students.

Try it out

Instructions for implementing a similar peer review process:

  1. Have students submit their draft essays using Feedback Fruits’ Peer Review tool.
  2. Assign each student to review a set number of peers’ essays using a detailed rubric.
  3. Provide a clear assessment rubric and training on how to give constructive feedback.

Technical insights

For Michael, setting up the FeedbackFruits tool in 2024 was straightforward, especially with the ability to import settings from the previous year. Minor technical issues, such as submission discrepancies, were manageable and did not significantly impact the overall process.

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Instructions for peer review submissions

Instructions by teacher. Submit your draft essay, then review three of your peers’ submissions. Use the rubric to guide your review comments. Guidance regarding assignment details can be found at the Writing Assignment page. You are not permitted to use tools or software which can be used to synthesise and analyse information when completing this assessment. This is because we need to assess your ability to synthesise and ana- lyse information, and we are unable to do so if you use a tool which does this on your behalf. Examples of such tools/software include (but are not limited to) Copilot, ChatGPT, or Gemini. In submitting your work, you agree to the following academic integrity statement: As a member of the University’s student body, I will complete this assessment in a fair, honest, responsible and trustworthy manner. This means that: I will not seek out any unauthorised help in completing this assessment. Please note: unauthorised help includes seeking assistance or advice from anyone, using a tutorial or answer service whether in person or online, asking fellow students, friends or family, etc. I will not discuss or share the content of the assessment with anyone else in any form, including but not limited to, Canvas, Piazza, Chegg, Facebook, Twitter, Discord, Messenger or any other social media plat- form or messaging service within the assessment window. I will not reproduce and/or share the content of this assessment in any domain or in any form where it may be accessed by a third party. I am aware the University of Auckland may use Turnitin or any other plagiarism detecting methods to check my content. I declare that this assessment is my own work, except where acknowledged appropriately (e.g., use of referencing). Please note: It is not appropriate (and will be considered plagiarism) to reproduce or copy material provided by your teachers, including lecture slides, lecture notes and/or course readings in your exam. All content must be written in your own words and referenced appropriately. If quoting a source, quotations must be used and referenced appropriately. I declare that this work has not been submitted for academic credit in this course or another University of Auckland course, or elsewhere. I declare that I generated the calculations and data in this assessment independently, using only the tools and resources defined for use in this assessment. I declare that I composed the writing and/or translations in this assessment independently, using on the tools and resources defined for use in this assessment. I understand the University expects all students to complete coursework with integrity and honesty. I promise to complete all online assessment with the same academic integrity standards and values. Any breach of this statement or identified academic misconduct will be followed up and may result in disciplinary action.

Figure 1: Instructions for peer review submissions.

Student submission progress analytics

screenshot of student progress analytics showing completed/completed late, and students with deadline extensions along with number of files handed in

Figure 2: Student submission progress analytics.

Student analytics for reviews

Student analytics for reviews, including information on what students have extensions, percent weighting of the task, most commonly seen words such as essay, good, source, conclusion. Progress bar showing student progress by percent and a list of blacked out student names showing the status of their completion ranging from not started: 23 students to completed 944 students

Figure 3: Student analytics for peer reviews.

See also

FeedbackFruits

Find out more about the Peer Review Assignment and Group Member Evaluation tools.

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Dr Michael Hoffmann

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Published

12 November 2024
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